Dear reader, please access a copy of the beta chapter here.
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Share your honest feedback, including whether the story makes you want to keep reading; whether you found any typos; whether any sentences seemed awkward or confusing; what the opening scene suggests about what you might expect from the rest of the book; and whether the first chapter makes you feel lost in the series, as if you need to read Book I. Please also offer any other comments you might have.
If you’d like to read Book I, please visit here.
NOTE: The attached beta chapter is copyrighted material and cannot be shared electronically, reproduced, or distributed in any other form without permission, as this work is protected under copyright law.
Thank you again for taking the time to read my beta chapter. I appreciate your feedback.
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