Video from independent editor Ellen Brock: 1.) Unclear point of view & “head-hopping” – This mistake can scare off agents/editors/publishers 2.) Too much voice (overly poetic or descriptive) 3.) Not enough voice (robotic writing and not enough description) 4.) Too much telling 5.) Not enough conflict and/or no clear goal for protag
Video from independent editor Ellen Brock:
1.) Unclear point of view & “head-hopping” – This mistake can scare off agents/editors/publishers
2.) Too much voice (overly poetic or descriptive)
3.) Not enough voice (robotic writing and not enough description)
4.) Too much telling
5.) Not enough conflict and/or no clear goal for protag
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